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Post by chibi on Jul 16, 2004 18:28:20 GMT -5
Post comments or questions here. I personally think the chapters are a litttle short, but oh well. I'd like to hear what you guys think. I'll probably update every now and then, it depends if anyone is interested in the story still.
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Post by Raven on Jul 17, 2004 10:53:17 GMT -5
I like it a lot.
can't wait till the nekst chapter is done.
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Post by Kanashi on Jul 17, 2004 23:48:49 GMT -5
It's awsome, Like the flow of the story, and characters, can't wait till next chapter. ^_^'
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Post by Blind on Jul 18, 2004 0:31:11 GMT -5
I like it, it has a nice flow to it esp. at the end, it leaves the reader wanting for more.
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Post by chibi on Jul 21, 2004 22:37:13 GMT -5
Yay! Second post is up and I added chapter names. They aren't that good for the first chapters, but they do better later on. I'll have the next update Monday or Tuesday and I'll post two chapters because I'm leaving for ten days shortly afterwards. Tell me what you think about the new chapter!
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Post by Raven on Jul 22, 2004 6:18:54 GMT -5
I like it. The chapter is realy good, and the story realy get's intresting. Can't wait till the nexst chapter.  |
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Post by chibi on Jul 25, 2004 21:02:18 GMT -5
I decided to post this today so that I could spread out the chapters a bit and not give two at once. I'll try my best to update Tuesday, and if I don't you'll just have to wait for me to finish vacation. ;D Enjoy, please comment. <edit> I don't feel like making another post, but I'll let y'all know that the fourth chapter is up now. |
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Post by Raven on Jul 26, 2004 17:36:19 GMT -5
It's great as alway's. I'll be whaithing for the nexst chapter. |
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Post by Kanashi on Jul 31, 2004 22:08:47 GMT -5
I likes it still, getting intresting. waiting for more |
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Post by chibi on Aug 9, 2004 10:47:14 GMT -5
Okay, I've made it back and finally in a stable mental state. ;D Hope y'all like it.
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Post by chibi on Aug 31, 2004 18:49:36 GMT -5
Okay! Put up all chapters that are currently completed. I'm just going to put the stuff up here as I feel like it. I was going to try to go on a schedule with a little extra incase I got behind, but I gave up. LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS!
Oh yeah, just for the fun of it, I'm giving spoilers that won't really do much. (you should have been able to guess some stuff)
Toro is back in the next chapter
Next chapter is called Prince and Princess
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Post by seigfox on Sept 3, 2004 15:43:11 GMT -5
Wow, good story, it kept me interested (a hard thing to do). Keep up the good work.  |
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Post by chibi on Sept 4, 2004 14:18:44 GMT -5
Thanks so much seigfox!!! That makes me so happy to hear. ;D
Yeah, new chapter up. It's okay, but I'd call it a filler like chapter to help move the story along more. that might be happening for a while, I don't know. Depends on how I write (well... I guess that is obvious). I'll probably have the next chapter done by Wednesday, most likely sooner.
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Post by Raven on Sept 4, 2004 17:38:24 GMT -5
Great story chibi.
I realy like it alot.
I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Post by VimoZ on Sept 4, 2004 17:48:47 GMT -5
Hummmmmmm ill have to read that story soon (not now thu, late) and leave a edit here ^^. It seems much better spelled and all that than mine  but thats not really hard^^... Ill be back here soon. --- [Future edit] |
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but thats not really hard^^... Ill be back here soon.