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Post by Defender_16 on May 25, 2004 8:22:25 GMT -5
Why hasn't somone done this sooner?
Tom I still think this prologue is really cool. It would be nice to see more of them but you're busy with the comic.
So who IS the mysterious person who is leading an army against the Templar?
Is it Flora? (I doubt it.)
The previous Grand Templar who was turned into a Keidran?
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Post by chibi on May 27, 2004 15:09:43 GMT -5
Wow, I totally forgot about Tom's story.  That being said, the Prologue is amazing. I hope to see more soon. Since this is book three, what happened to book one and two?  I hope to see more sometime if possible. ;D And thanks to Defender_16 for reminding me about this story, I'm so forgetful. |
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Post by gobleteer on May 28, 2004 17:05:14 GMT -5
It's Flora! It says so it the prologue, even!
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Post by Defender_16 on May 28, 2004 17:46:02 GMT -5
But it just dosen't fit with the current Flora! Or even a future Flora which it would have to be.  *GASP* That is unless Trace's old personality re-surfaces and takes over puting him back in the position of Grand Templar and general Evil dude. OH GOD I CAN'T GO ON!!!  |
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Post by theodorus on May 29, 2004 1:32:52 GMT -5
But it just dosen't fit with the current Flora! Or even a future Flora which it would have to be. *GASP* That is unless Trace's old personality re-surfaces and takes over puting him back in the position of Grand Templar and general Evil dude. OH GOD I CAN'T GO ON!!! interesting if it is a future flora and trance, this is going to be something to see though if he does turn evil agian it is going to be very depressing |
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Post by Id on Jun 5, 2004 22:06:35 GMT -5
...Yeah, but it's true, he is in his true nature in the second post, the harbator of evil.
And talking about the second post...it actually sent a shiver down my back...a VERY rare occurence (Well, the post and listining to Godsmack at whisper volume). Anyway, I'm begging to like the third book so keep it up Tom. Also...I kinda want to read more of the first too...of course that might mess up the current story line. Wow, it would actually be kinda fun to watch the paradoxes work themselves out.
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Post by Defender_16 on Jun 7, 2004 10:35:20 GMT -5
Dude. This is becoming .....um.....I cant find the right words. It's creepy but kick ass at the same time, but there's also the "What's going to happen?!" factor there.
;D Keep it up!
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Post by chibi on Jun 7, 2004 10:41:53 GMT -5
Very interesting... This is going to be really cool. I can't tell much about Trace yet, but he is a bit more evil now. I want to see what is going to happen next! ;D
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Post by Raven on Jun 10, 2004 7:47:35 GMT -5
Hey you guy's also notist somthing strange?
Besitin, humen's and keidran's fihting on tje same site.
Wel that's somthing you don't see evry day.
And Flora is going to fight Trace somthing rely went rong between those two, And she got a scard face hhhmmm wonder how she looks now
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Post by MwaYes I should log in on Jun 17, 2004 13:32:57 GMT -5
...I kinda want to read more of the first too... Theres a first book? Where? |
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Post by Raven on Jun 17, 2004 14:49:33 GMT -5
Wel The strip is the second and you can read the third at the story bord.
But The first wil kom after the second and the third are Finishend.
So you just have to wait.
EDIT:
Who Tom the chapter 2/part 1 is realy good.
I liked it a lot.
Hope to read the second part soon.
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Post by chibi on Jul 22, 2004 10:28:50 GMT -5
Yay! there is more to read! I like it a whole bunch. Very, very detailed. I can't wait for part two of this chapter, I expect it to be very interesting. ;D
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Post by Tategami on Aug 2, 2004 1:06:23 GMT -5
OOOOOOoooooooooooooooooo.......... ;D I just love all of Tom's work... I'm jonesing for some more of his stories :3
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Post by VimoZ on Aug 7, 2004 4:24:28 GMT -5
I was just reading the third book, really great work, but well a little unhappy but i suppose thats make it all better later (if there is one). Cause some parts with the second book are getting in place, such as trace little brain flippflopp with the tower and he got evil again, just... he wont stay evil for the rest of the strips i hope  . Note: Actualy the Thirdbook was more good time spend than reading the book im reading  (Ofcause mine is a book that makes me hate certain religios belifes even more, its about the Templar Order (no not keidran hating ones, more like jude and turkish hating ones), and how they slaughter innocent people but are still to be seen as "good".) Sry for the out of discution thingy^^ Just saying Tom writes better than some fancy Dr.Shneider blah blah. |
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Post by Tom on Aug 11, 2004 20:03:20 GMT -5
Here's a consept sketch I was messing around with today. Just trying to visualize the older Flora a little better... still.. working on it, I guess. I'll try and do some more for the other people in the story, and maybe a scene or two if you guys want. |
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That being said, the Prologue is amazing. I hope to see more soon. Since this is book three, what happened to book one and two? 
I hope to see more sometime if possible. ;D
*GASP* 
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(Ofcause mine is a book that makes me hate certain religios belifes even more, its about the Templar Order (no not keidran hating ones, more like jude and turkish hating ones), and how they slaughter innocent people but are still to be seen as "good".) Sry for the out of discution thingy^^ Just saying Tom writes better than some fancy Dr.Shneider blah blah.
