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Post by Defender_16 on Jun 10, 2004 10:59:19 GMT -5
You have Dyslexia? Oh Jesus that was inconsiderate of me with the spelling. I feel like such an idiot now.  *Slaps self in the face* I had just about finished writing out a big PM to you about spelling, grammar and the"Modify" button.  Oh my god I'm glad I saw this first. |
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Post by MarioRPG on Jun 10, 2004 14:31:07 GMT -5
The early stuff started as an expansion of the Star Trek universe in 1994. That's pretty cool. (I'm a big Trek fan.  ) I knew that Dyson Sphere sounded familiar. . . (ST:TNG episode "Relics"; that's a good ep. cuz Scotty's in it ) |
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Post by Raven on Jun 10, 2004 16:14:59 GMT -5
You have Dyslexia? Oh Jesus that was inconsiderate of me with the spelling. I feel like such an idiot now. *Slaps self in the face* I had just about finished writing out a big PM to you about spelling, grammar and the"Modify" button. Oh my god I'm glad I saw this first. Dont wury about it but thanks for understanding ;D Dyslexia RELY SUCKS   Rihting a story is imposible for me. |
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Post by Defender_16 on Jun 11, 2004 14:57:31 GMT -5
Post 08 is up!! HECK YEAH!! Post 09 is being worked on and Post 10 will follow shortly after. (OR - I could make Post 09 an extra long one instead. ) There is a plot twist coming up soon and after Post 10 I will have no clue what to write. (I came up with the background info for posts 8,9,& 10 more than a month ago.) Once I post the 10th one I'm going to need suggestions for what to do next. Just wait till that part is done first.  EDIT at 8:04pm EST: Post 09 is going up!! EDIT at 9:15pm EST: Post 10 is finished and going up. ;D |
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Post by Raven on Jun 11, 2004 15:11:02 GMT -5
Damn! This is getting better and better.
Keep it up. ;D
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Post by Defender_16 on Jun 14, 2004 20:43:32 GMT -5
Bleh.... not feeling good.
Ok, I think Post 10 is going to have to be redone. I rushed it to get the last part of this section finished all at once and paid the price.
So many places where I could write it better it's astounding.
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Post by Raven on Jul 16, 2004 11:42:47 GMT -5
I diden't think it was that bad.
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Post by MarioRPG on Aug 5, 2004 0:13:03 GMT -5
Er, when's the next post gonna happen? I really want to see what's gonna happen next in the story.
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Post by Defender_16 on Aug 15, 2004 23:58:30 GMT -5
Oops! Well a number of things happend to slow this whole thing down. I got a job, I want to continue writing for my main story and I now have Halo Custom Edition. All of these things take up alot of time. Writing a fanfic -as cool as it is- isn't getting me anywhere. Things to do list: -Work at job. -Continue writing dyson (now at a fixed level of work) -Go white water rafting on the Ottawa river.  -Take my drivers test for my full Licence before my G2 expires. -Perform daily Tech support for my home Lan. -um....Sleep? lol If it's really important though, I supose I could re-work how I was going to continue it. I actually did do some work on a continuation, but it was boring as heck and I didn't have any sort of fixed end goal like I did before with storming the Tower. The way I write is that I need to know the end first, followed by the beginning, and I fill in the middle from there. I suppose what I really need to figure out is what the next major goal should be. |
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) I knew that Dyson Sphere sounded familiar. . . (ST:TNG episode "Relics"; that's a good ep. cuz Scotty's in it 
Freak out!
