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Post by Id on Mar 30, 2004 18:54:53 GMT -5
Well, first off I would like to say that I think I caused a trend to appear; second, if you use bad spelling and grammer, don't complain to me about mine; third, the story is great; and my last rant for now: is Dyson a book or webcomic?
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Post by MarioRPG on May 20, 2004 15:19:54 GMT -5
What I wanna know is if there's more to come? I'm really interested in this story. . .
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Post by Defender_16 on May 20, 2004 17:32:13 GMT -5
Wow.......um.....ok. Sure i'll write more then. I didnt think anyone was interested so I stopped. I also quit because of endless amounts of College classes which are out now so I can get back to things. I was just yesterday thinking about removing the existing story posts and puting them back in after being corrected for grammar and spelling. academic.algonquincollege.com/students/pros0015/page3.htm That's the link to the DYSON section of my website. (Which I can't update  ) I don't like giving out the link very much these days cause I'm becoming Paranoid. Eventually somone's going to come along and steal all of my work and then sell it. Another reason I quit writing Fanfic's and crossovers. |
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Post by Defender_16 on May 22, 2004 22:03:41 GMT -5
Ok so right now the Dyson/Twokinds crossover fic is *Removed until corrected version is finished* And believe it or not I'm actually getting some work done on it. Just not on the original few posts yet so I haven't reposted them. Inspirsation on how to continue the story finally hit me today while I was having a shower(   ) And by the time I finished getting the notes down for the new stuff it was time to leave to see Shrek 2. I'll get more don't eventually. (Just make sure to reminde me occasionally. ) |
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Post by Defender_16 on May 24, 2004 11:36:22 GMT -5
Post 01 and Post 02 have been re-posted with corrected spelling and some slight changes to grammar in places. If the grammar is still screwed up show me the exact sentence that needs fixing.
EDIT: Added Post 03 after doing a quick check.
EDIT 2: Opps I did it again! Post 04 is now finished and up all in the same day.
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Post by Defender_16 on May 26, 2004 12:08:10 GMT -5
Post 05 going up.  Lets hear some comments. Good, bad, ugly, you name it. EDIT: Post 06 going up. |
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Post by Dragon on May 26, 2004 17:00:49 GMT -5
I loved it ;D
write more soon
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Post by Defender_16 on May 30, 2004 14:19:26 GMT -5
Post 07 is up. I dont like the way I wrote this one. I had to struggle past a writers block first and then I rushed finishing it because I was interupted.  |
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Post by Id on May 30, 2004 16:10:30 GMT -5
I had to struggle past a writers block I hate that, I'm pretty sure everyone does, and when you get it you can't think of how to get over it |
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Post by MarioRPG on May 31, 2004 22:08:33 GMT -5
Having writer's block sux. It annoys the heck out of me whenever I get it. . .
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Post by Mwa on Jun 3, 2004 12:54:13 GMT -5
Hmmm? [glow=purple,100,90000]More![/glow] xD
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Post by Defender_16 on Jun 3, 2004 20:46:33 GMT -5
Gaah!! Too much suff to do! 1st - Appeal one of my marks at College and most likely lose.  2nd - Keep looking for a job. 3rd - Help my previous boss strip down an old appartment for 2 days of payed work.  4th - Keep working on Dyson.  5th - Keep looking into Copywrites for Dyson. 6th - Um....Perform a dozen head shots a day with the sniper rifle on Halo PC.  EDIT: 7th - Work on Dyson-Twokinds Crossover fanfiction.  |
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Post by Raven on Jun 9, 2004 14:40:45 GMT -5
:oWoah man, you're story really is something. If you finish it you should make it a official book and sell it. I think it will do great.
Love the story keep up the good work. ;D
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Post by Defender_16 on Jun 9, 2004 15:04:12 GMT -5
:oWo ah m an you 're story real ly is somthing if you fini sh it you sh ou ld make it a n of ficial book and sell it , I think it w oul d do great. Love the story keep up the good w ork ;D Well it's nice to hear some good comments bout one of my fanfictions. This one though is a cross between some characters from my science fiction universe set in Tom's Twokinds universe. I can't continue the story at the moment because I need to find out more about the Templars and their Towers first. I have been working on the Dyson universe and series since August 2001 when I created the Alexander Valient character. The early stuff started as an expansion of the Star Trek universe in 1994. (If anyone steals/uses my Sci-fi universe without permission, I will hunt them down. That is not an idle threat, I WILL cross international boundaries to do it.) |
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Post by Raven on Jun 10, 2004 5:47:53 GMT -5
No wonder you realy have telent for this. To bad I got dislection If i richt somthin there to moch grammer problems no one whill read that And why you dont ask Tom about the towers and Templers or think somthing op. |
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Freak out!
) I don't like giving out the link very much these days cause I'm becoming Paranoid. 
