Id's story: "The Power"

[Id]

Warning cuss words included
Updated when ever Id gets off his lazy butt and types, and now I sleep.

Another warring I forgot to include, IF YOU DARE TAKE MY IDEA WITH OUT MY PERMISION I WILL FIND YOU, there is NO excape.
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Comic #1
Opening

Russ the 6’1” master swords man who is a Shuned, a being born of an angel and a demon, these beings are famous for having blue hair with orange streaks, having silver Irises and pupils, but the most identifying part is the wings, witch are covered by a baggie magically enhanced trench coat called a zoot-sute, one is blue and feathery the other is orange and scaly, was running to the newly formed city of Ksir, famous for their ability to create high powered guns, when his Reseon, a Reseon acts like an anchor for beings who have no set dimensional plain of existence, called him via telepathy
“Russ can you hear me? Its me Josifen”
“Yes loud and clear” getting closer to a cross roads he see a young man who is about 5’10” and has blood red hair, is walking slowly and is fading away
“Russ do you know how that is?”
"Know who is he, he looks hurt”
“Russ that’s the prince of Ksir, Jake, he is your way off of Flonens”
“What?! No then that means...”
“That’s right Ksir has fallen”
“Crap...alright I must help him”
Russ ran up to Jake “oh man no wounded he is fading so quickly his <meld life> is disintegrating at an unbelievable rate I gotta try and stop this” Russ took off his zoot-sute and his wings appeared simultaneously, “not much I can do but I must try” he laid the zoot-sute over the almost gone body of Jake, then he laid his blue angelic wing over the coat, “I won’t let you die, Líf gefa” a blue light glowed around Jake as the life spell tried to force <meld life> in to Jake but it failed, seeing this Russ tried again but had no luck, slowly Russ began to relies that the possibility of keeping Jake alive was impossible. "NO, NO, NO THIS CAN'T BE, why, my penitence was complete, those bastards I'll kill them!!!’
A flash of orange light surrounds Russ, and his hair and eyes turns completely orange also his angelic wing molted and flooded orange
Leaving Jake for dead Russ drew is sword and took flight to Ksir when a flash of white light blinded him and he fell hard and fast to the ground.
#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys

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Comic #2
Reawakened out of self and time

Russ is sitting on nothing, body less his “essence” sits alone in nothingness, an unknown shape appears, a wrath, one of guide of all souls, while Russ is mumbling to him self
“Where am I why is its silent and cold? No I'm not cold maybe I am empty or perhaps I’m dead”
The wrath walks up to Russ, and lays its hand on Russ’s shoulder
“No Russ you are not empty, nor dead, this is just unreality, your subconscious mind”
“Unreality? Does that mean that I failed, my head feels clogged I can't think”
“This is because the Shuned lord Id has decided that you should be given a new chance, a second start”
“Id? Crap I can’t believe that I messed up that badly”
The wrath sighed, “You did not fail Russ, you can not fail, but certain events were triggered that we could not stop, Russ the Fate control has reawakened”
Russ stares at the wrath in disbelief “What no…how is it possible? I thought that Mangius killed that thing”
“It was impossible for her to kill it, you know as well as I do, the Fate control is in us all, and the only way to truly kill it is to destroy existence”
“Yea I know but still I wish it was not true.”
“Yes Russ so do we all, but do not worry about that now, now is the new life”
“What?”
The wrath moves his entire “body” and creates a bubble around Russ “Sħåļ-Ŀēńŧĩü Æűłđö ġąůťǘż ēďŕœ ēġİŞò ijěξж”
Translation of the Kali spell: The power with in us is dimming, we ask for new life, and with it we ask for time, we wish that this new more fearsome power be sent, back to fix what he has damaged, now Shuned return to your begging and be blessed with the will to fix your errors.
The bubble around Russ popped and a rift appeared but this one had an infinitely high gravitational pull
“Good luck Russ” was the last thing that Russ heard before hitting the ground and passing out
…But Jake did not turn to dust...

#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys

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Comic #3
Watch out, that fourth wall hurts

Two children, a boy and a girl, are playing in the woods when they herd a crash “Hey brother what was that?”
“I don’t know sis, lets go check it out”
Russ was slowly regaining his memories when the kids ran up to him
“Where am I?” he asked himself
The young boy whispered to the girl and she ran off in the direction that they came from
“Where is she going, oh man my head, what have I been drinking?”
Russ coughs and it startled the boy
“Its alive? But its head is crushed and cracked in a billion places”
He was about to move Russ when two new people came in to view
“Max don’t touch him”
Drawing back his hand quickly “Ok father, but what should I do?”
“Go get the new healer, the Fél-emberi healer”
“Yes father” Max said as he ran off in the opposite direction
The man bent over Russ and looked at his wounds “Humm, it looks really bad, but the strange thing is that there seems to be no real physical damage to him” he flips over Russ “Aha that’s why, he is not human”
The woman gets a worried look in her eye “you mean that he is an Fél-emberi? Charles, tell me is he one of those monsters?”
A bit angry but still in control “No he is not a Fél-emberi, he does not even come from this dimension, Martha he is a Shuned”
“What is a Shuned, and how do you know what that is?”
Charles sighed “The Shuned were bred over 30 million years ago, they are the spawn of a rare mating ritual that was done between the angles and the demands, these creatures were made in to enforcers of the “lower” dimensions, that is all you need to know. Look I see the healer now”

#nosmileys

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Comic #4
Russ, meet your new, old friend Josifen

Russ is lifted up off the stretcher, and placed on a cot.
The healer looks at Russ’s wounds more closely “I don’t know what caused these wounds or why they are healing so fast, not even the Shuned can heal this fast”
“My guess Josifen is that he was sent through a Kali rift”
“A time bubble?”
“Yes but what I want to know is what caused it”
Russ opened his eyes “uhhh where am I?”
Josifen looked at his eyes “no concussions…do you know your name, or what you are?”
“Yes I am Russ a Shuned”
“Who is your Reason?”
“I-I-I don’t know, I can’t remember much”
Charles walked to the hut’s door, “Josifen…Ode įbœ olüd ữ ą þŗōņ” and then he walked out “be careful”
Josifen turned back to Russ “your wounds are almost healed, please leave once they are”
Josifen turned back to the door when Russ asked, “So you’re a Hathatós, you are also a reason with out a Shuned, heh so you’re the exception, the rarity”
This shocks and somewhat angers Josifen, “what do you mean the ‘rarity’?”
Russ sighs, “Yes you are the only one who could finally kill the Fate control”
Josifen’s eyes narrow “the Fate control?”
“Yes the Fate control, it was created to dictate the everyday actions of the inhabitants different dimensions, because they were unreasonable and destructive, but be shut off at major decisions in that being life. But the Fate control was not easily tamed and it over rid its safety protocols and took full control over the universe.”
“WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU MAKE THAT THING”
“THEY did not have a choice, I was born to protect that thing, but my destiny was broken a treridecade approximately 9.0 X 10^100000000000000000 years ago years ago, but it will revive in 29000 years”
“So what it would not effect me now”
“Are you sure about that?”
“What do you mean?”
“The control can exist out side of our perception of time, so it can be anywhere at anytime”
“I…see…ok look I don’t think it is a good idea to help you…but if you help my friends get away from those slavers then I will help you anyway that I can.”
“Slavers huh, no problem, but your coming with me”
“Why?”
“To waken your <meld> control”
“<Meld>?”
“Think of it as true magic”

#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys

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Comic #5
Tactics of the Shuned

Russ and Josifen run up the hill overlooking the enslavement site.
“Gees that’s a lot of people Russ.”
“Yes I count at least 900 slavers, let me guess it is a profitable ‘occupation’?”
“Sadly it’s a gov’t supported job the slavers get immunity from many crimes, everything from breaking and entering and murder to rape.”
“…That is discussing, heh but I have a plan just for them”
“Huh? What do you mean ‘just for them’?”
“Do you know the sársauki við margir vitaskip wave?”
“Yes and I can hit them all, but I don’t have the skill to kill them all, only stun them for a second”
“Good that’s all I need, ok here is the plan, I will fly over them and then once I am behind the encampment I will turn around and dive in, during the turn I need you to use the sársauki við margir vitaskip wave to distract them, then I will make my move”
“Uh ok I guess.”
Russ took off his zoot-sute and flew up in the sky. And then passed the slavers encampment.
“Ok its time, I just hope this won’t kill me”
Russ completely flipped over in mid air and started his dive.
“What the hell is that? Shoot that thing, shoot it”
As soon as that was said billons of white lights shot out of Josifen’s palm and hit the slaves as well as the slavers. Before anyone could recover Russ landed
“I HATE SLAVERY, *to himself* its reminds me of what happened before.”
Then Russ opened his wings to there full extent, and the angelic wing glowed bright blue.
“YOU DO NOT DESERVE LIFE, DIEEEEEEE”
Russ swung his wings at the slavers, and every feather shot off and landed in the slavers necks, only one was missed
“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, YOU CAN NOT KILL ME I AM PERFICT”
The slaver drew his sword and drove it in to Russ’s chest
“HEHEHEHEHE, NONE CAN STOP ME. And now for you, Reason”
Josifen fell down while trying to run away
“No this can’t be happening”

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Comic #6
Who saw that coming? Well me duh.

Russ is still lying in the grass as he watched the captor chase Josifen.
“*Cough cough* uhhh he is no normal human *cough* he made me bleed”
Russ stood up and dusted himself off before checking the wound
“Bah just a flesh wound but sill… *Josifen screamed in the distance* oh shit, JOSIFEN I’M COMING”
*Scene cut to Josifen and the slaver*
Josifen is crawling backwards when she hits a tree
“No where left to go now demon”
“Please don’t hurt me”
“HAHAHAHAHA HURT YOU hehehe no I’m not gona hurt you, no I’m gona kill you”
He raises his sword
“Now DIE uhgh”
He slowly falls and Russ is right behind him with a dagger in hand
“Josifen are you all right”
“RUSS!?”
“Yeah its me”
“Thank god, and yes I’m ok what about my friends?
“They should be wakening up soon”
Russ picks up the fallen slaver
“hummm still alive, well I should of expected that”
“Huh? What do you mean?”
“I broke his neck but he is not a normal human”
“I see…so he is one of the perficio humanus”
Russ and Josifen arrive at the slave camp
“See I told you they would be wakening up soon”

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Comic #7
…You title this

Russ puts the perficio humanus in side a building and then unlocks a chin of Fél-emberi
"Everyone who has been freed search a guard and take the keys to unlock the others”
Doing so the Fél-emberi were freed and they started to crowd around Russ and Josifen when one of then, clearly the oldest one, looked Russ right in the face
“Thank you for saving us…I owe you a debt, Destroyer, and that debt will need to be repaid.”
“D-destroyer?”
The old man turns to Josifen
“Yes young one he is the Destroyer, of what I can not be certain but he will destroy something big, and powerful”
“So its true…Alright look is getting dark lets find some food, and get this guy in a cell”
“Follow us, the cells should provide us protection from the horrors of the night.”
Russ followed the old man in to what were once the cages for the Fél-emberi, soon after a fire was started in the kitchen and the cell doors were locked
“Ah yes it it’s a very bad thing to get caught out side at night now a-days, you never know what might be looking for a meal.” The old man said, absently almost to him self, he turned back to the two, “hummm you will need a place to sleep won’t you, there is an empty room over there” he points to the far left corner of the barracks/cells, “the beds are not the best but at least they are clean”
Russ and Josifen thank the old man and walk over to their respective “rooms”
“good night” was the last thing they said to each other before falling asleep
#nosmileys

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Comic #8
Flashback…flash-forward…uh…I know, plot development

Josifen giggles as she pushed Russ off of his bed
“Come on sleepy we don’t wanna be late do we?”
Russ rolls over, grabs a blanket and curls up in it
“*Yawn* late for what?”
Josifen walks over to the rolled up Shuned, and casts a spell to unroll him
“You know the ‘ceremony’ now come on were gona be late”
With this Russ snapped in to focus
“OH SHIT”
With this Russ hurried up and put on some clean cloths and his zoot-sute.
“OH SHIT, OH SHIT, OH SHIT”
“Come on we’ll get food on the way”
Josifen and Russ jump in to a transit tube, only stopping at a fast food parlor.
“So Jos, who is gonna be…enhanced today?”
Josifen giggles
“Oh it might be someone you know”
“…Oh great just keep me in the dark, I bet its that Ludiwig guy that you dislike”
“Heh no, oh were here already”
Russ and Josifen stiffen their bodies up to get ready for the landing
“Oh man I always hated that thing”
A figure stands up when he saw the two but slowly slunk back in to his chair
“Oh man Russ Id is gonna be so pissed. Hurry up it is not gonna be cool if he relies your not in there”

[Id]

Comic #9
Ouch…that sucks

Russ and Josifen open a door but instead of the angelic great hall it was Id’s office
Id, the lord of all Shuned, turned around as the two walked in, and showed them a chair
“…you know you completely missed the celebration”
Russ almost droped his jaw
“B-b-but the time was changed”
“…yes…I know, I don’t know why but it was, anyway that’s not important, this is”
Id walks over to his desk and pulls out a deck of cards
“Eh? What’s that?” Josifen asked
Id walked over to Russ
“This, my dear, is no ordinary deck of cards”
Id puts the deck in Russ’s hand and the cards begin to glow, soon after they absorb themselves in to his body
“AHHHHHHH what is going on?”
“Do not worry Russ all is well, you are just gaining the power”
“ERRGH what power?”
“Russ you have been chosen to be the next inline for the Eras”
The pain subsided and a cool relief flowed through Russ’s body
“Ahh, so basically what your saying is that I can us magic now?”
“Yes Russ, but there is something you should remember, you have a set amount of cards, and every time you use one its gone forever, but if you find the cards, or take them off of others, you can use them”
“Win them?”
“Yes think of it as a game, if you lose your either almost dead or dead.”
“WHAT? WHY DID YOU GIVE ME THESE THAN”
“For you to learn on”
Id pusses a button on his desk and Russ and Josifen fall through the floor
*************


Russ woke up in a cold sweat, with his hand glowing from where the cards were

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Comic # 10
…Ok…so I should stop making tiles…and behold my 200th post

Russ looked around, and seeing that Josifen was still asleep Russ got off of his bed quietly, and walked to the door
“You should sleep now, Josifen, we will have a busy day tomorrow”
Russ walks out in to the main room, the cells are in a separate from the “common room” where the Fél-emberi could talk to each other and get warm and eat.
A upon walking in to the room Russ sees the Old Fél-emberi who help them find a room.
“So it has awoken in you, has it?”
“What do you mean?”
“The Eras as awoken to ‘play’ again”
“Oh yeah that…damnit, I don’t want this”
“Yes I am sure, I was one of the very few who survived the game”
The old man slowly got up and walked over to a couch
“So tell me how many cards you have”
Russ looks at a LED screen on his forearm
“Only five damn that’s not gonna help me”
“I see”
The old man lifts up the cushions of the couch, and takes out what look to be a full fifty Eras deck, after dusting them off he hands them to Russ
“Here, there not the very best, but the will do in a pinch”
Russ took the deck and held them up to his hand; slowly the cards begin to seep in to his body
“Thank you, uh?”
**********
Josifen woke up screeming
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