What do you think of my story

[Id]

Of course it's not a trap...or is it? ,

Yeah, thanks for the book reccomendations, I will try to find those.

Also, a reccomendation that I have is to read the "His Dark Materials" trilogy. I kinda took some ideas from him, but not many.


...and now to start my own flashback...well, when I get off from work anyway...damn job.

[Craig]

Defender_16 said:

Hey Id here's 2 books I recommend
-Halo: The Fall of Reach
-Halo: First Strike
The author has a very distinctive writing style. You should check it out, I think it would fit well with your story.

...Or, you could just read both Chuck Palahniuk and Isaac Asimov at the same time. It's kinda creepy, but it gave me ideas.

[Id]

Craig said:

...Or, you could just read both Chuck Palahniuk and Isaac Asimov at the same time. It's kinda creepy, but it gave me ideas.

...any book exactly, or just pick one that looks good?

[naruto]

i like ur story its awsome ;D