Erdojaro
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Post by Erdojaro on Oct 11, 2004 8:35:49 GMT -5
I am trying to make a comic, and this is one of the main characters. I don't like the drawing, but hate the coloring. What do you think of it? He is running, and he is hunted by someones. But now is happy, becouse he can escape by flying away. edit: www.2and2.net/Priv/kep.jpgerdojaro.fw.hu/kep.jpgI hope at least one of them works. (use copy/paste)
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Post by Raven on Oct 11, 2004 9:15:35 GMT -5
I think the link dosen't work.
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Post by GT1047 on Oct 11, 2004 9:26:56 GMT -5
Nope dosent work.
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Post by Raven on Oct 11, 2004 13:48:04 GMT -5
You said he isen't seposed to be happy becas there hunthig him down, but he looks happy to me. And he onley has 4 fingers, is that onpurpes?
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Erdojaro
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Post by Erdojaro on Oct 12, 2004 1:46:25 GMT -5
Yes, I know he has 4 fingers, on his legs and wings too. I wanted to make it different from humans. You are right, he seems too happy. I draw it too quick and forgot about it. So I decided to draw one, where he can be happy. www.2and2.net/Priv/kep02.jpgerdojaro.fw.hu/kep02.jpgPlease tell me what do you think of it.
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Post by Lardmaster on Oct 12, 2004 17:45:09 GMT -5
It looks lika smooth action figure ... Skinny wiht little muscle definfition. The eye in the second one makes him look .... um happpy ina way very few people associate with flying. Concept seems fun . Add a story and it could be very entertaining 2 read.
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Post by seigfox on Oct 14, 2004 14:38:04 GMT -5
That face... fraks me out. A lot.
Other then that, tis cool.
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Post by Raven on Oct 16, 2004 9:51:23 GMT -5
I think it's good but the wing isn't spread enoughf to fly. The first part is spread far enoughf but not the rest of the wing.
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Erdojaro
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Post by Erdojaro on Oct 16, 2004 11:03:50 GMT -5
He is moving up his wings, and he will fully open them when they are in top position, than he moves them down. It would be better if I could draw it in 3d, but I can't. I don't know if it is possible to fly that way, but don't care about it, becouse his wings are too small to fly. And his muscles are also too little to move his wings enought to fly with them. So he also use magic for flying, and secundery his wings. The magic or the wings are not enought alone, but together they are. Many dragon-like creature flies that way, with magic and wings together. (do not care about how I know dragons. I don't, but hey, I imagined it so)
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Post by Lardmaster on Oct 16, 2004 13:20:45 GMT -5
I don't, but hey, I imagined it so) Good... dreams such as this need not be concerned with reality. Its your world, do with it as you please.
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Post by GT1047 on Oct 16, 2004 21:42:07 GMT -5
Right you chose. ;D
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