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Post by Chris on Sept 17, 2004 1:13:39 GMT -5
Hey all, just posting one of my newer sketches to see what you all think. I havent had time to trace this yet, but its a start. I just started working on bodies and poses, hence the odd fight pose   Cheers, Chris |
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Post by rokkun on Sept 17, 2004 1:21:01 GMT -5
oops, sorry didnt know i was... like... logged out and stuff. Im new to this forum so i guess it was my goof-up. Just to let you know that was my drawing.. i just posted it as a guest for no reason at all  Cheers Chris EDIT: I appologize, photobucket liked my pictures and my account last night, it seems that it no longer does... Im looking for another site to host my pictures, i expect to get the picture working about 4 PM |
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Post by seigfox on Sept 17, 2004 14:41:28 GMT -5
A good pic, but some things to keep in mind:
1) Do witht the legs what you did with the arms. Having them spread like like makes him look bow legged (not a good look for a non-cowboy). The arms overlap themselves giving the drawing a look of a third demention(sp?), just do the same with the legs.
2) Study the shape of the skull and head as a whole from an angle. His head seems to project to far past his ear, and without enough coverage by hair, keep in mind that hair travels down the neck so there should be a shading even if it is really short.
All in all a good first action pose, keep drawing (and looking at martial arts poses in movies and manga to get a fell for how the body works in motion and pose). Oh and did I mention to keep drawing?
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Post by rokkun on Sept 17, 2004 21:19:26 GMT -5
hey thanks a lot for the advice. As i said this is my first real submitted work here and anywhere else, and it definitly wont be my last.
Cheers
Chris
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Post by Raven on Sept 18, 2004 11:38:33 GMT -5
It looks good, but the head is out op proportion.
That's al.
Keap op the good work.
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Post by chibi on Sept 18, 2004 17:50:54 GMT -5
his right leg looks like it is made out of jello, his leg is going to be straight where there is no knee, or he has some medical issues. His feet need to be larger as well. Ear looks a little out of place. Neck looks a tad bit long. The head over all looks like it's not quite right, but as if I'm some pro at this. Try a different pose that might be easier to do at first and then work from there to the more complicated stuff.
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Post by seigfox on Sept 22, 2004 15:57:23 GMT -5
Hey I know the world isn't made out of jello but I can dream can't I? ;D
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