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Post by Sage on Aug 30, 2004 21:06:10 GMT -5
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Post by Raven on Aug 31, 2004 12:44:43 GMT -5
Wo nice.
This is really good, and it's definitely one of you're best, especially the colouring.
Keap it op sage.
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Post by VimoZ on Aug 31, 2004 16:42:01 GMT -5
Nice sage ^^ Really nice. And yes i would say its your best, and some few errors are always common. But watch, dont turn to the evil to hentai side, but well your long away from there, but it always start with a small path dont it?
I can quete myself and my m8, tanslated ofcause, after a really wierd talk about good/evil topics.
-Ffs... stop using capslock before i kill you.
-NO! FOOL I DONT USE CAPSLOCK, SHIFT ARE THE ONLY TRUE PATH TO CHAOS...
Such small paths^^... (and its true, caps never get into my brain)
Again, nice Sage, like it really much, its cute.
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Post by seigfox on Aug 31, 2004 19:28:37 GMT -5
very nice coloring. something seems off... maybe the left arm. yeah, that's it. can't put my finger on why though. other than that, it's got an "innocent-sexy" feel to it.
On a side note, Sage that was an evil, evil guest comic.
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Post by chibi on Aug 31, 2004 19:34:29 GMT -5
There is something about the shirt that bugs me. It's what caused this late reply. I really wish I could figure out why. Maybe it's the pink, maybe it's the straps. Maybe it's because this dumb reply sounded like a poem in my mind. But it does no more. ;D
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Yotem
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Post by Yotem on Aug 31, 2004 20:48:14 GMT -5
As I said in chat, lovely drawing and now for the nitpicking:
-The left forearm: I don’t think it should go all the way to the body but rather there should be a space.
-Chest: The collar bone implies the torso is at one angle (3/4 or so) while the breast imply another angle (front view almost). Now if she had a large amount of padding in the chest are and it didn’t stay in place then it would make sense…
-Breasts/shadows: Shouldn’t the area right beneath them be darker than the stomach?
-Less clothing and more Yuri.
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Post by chibi on Aug 31, 2004 21:31:23 GMT -5
As I said in chat, lovely drawing and now for the nitpicking: -The left forearm: I don’t think it should go all the way to the body but rather there should be a space. -Chest: The collar bone implies the torso is at one angle (3/4 or so) while the breast imply another angle (front view almost). Now if she had a large amount of padding in the chest are and it didn’t stay in place then it would make sense… -Breasts/shadows: Shouldn’t the area right beneath them be darker than the stomach? -Less clothing and more Yuri. Wow, that helps my thought process in the nit picking.  The left arm isn't positioned right. Unless she is leaning on the bed, which doesn't look possible, she should probably be falling backwards because there is nothing behind her to keep her from falling. And about the chest, that was my problem with the shirt. Besides the color. And for my last thing, I think the bed is out of proportion, unless it's a whole lot shorter than her length-wise (well, it looks like a tight fight. It also looks too short to me, but my bed is lifted off the ground much more than the average, though I still think it should go to the lowest part of her left ear for a standard bed. And I lied about that being the last thing. As I told you in the chat I'm unobservant, but as I look at this for a second time the black around her window needed to fit better with the lineart. get that photoshop eraser out and clean that up. It doesn't go all the way down as well. But I like the rest of the coloring alot. Done for good now. *Zzzzzz.....* |
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Post by Yotem on Aug 31, 2004 22:00:55 GMT -5
The left arm isn't positioned right. Unless she is leaning on the bed, which doesn't look possible, she should probably be falling backwards because there is nothing behind her to keep her from falling. Her right arm could be holding her up (or her abs). She also doesn't appear to be leaning that far backwards so her left arm may be able to hold her up as well. |
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Post by Fox on Aug 31, 2004 22:20:03 GMT -5
I can't see it for some evil reason...>.<
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Post by Sage on Sept 1, 2004 0:15:13 GMT -5
again -- photobucket account down T_T anyone know another host? ^_^
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Post by Sage on Sept 1, 2004 14:43:19 GMT -5
yay! its up and working again!
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Post by chibi on Sept 1, 2004 14:50:13 GMT -5
Her right arm could be holding her up (or her abs). She also doesn't appear to be leaning that far backwards so her left arm may be able to hold her up as well. My arms aren't the strongest and neither are my abs, but it still looks a little one sided to me *the right seems okay, but the left is still bugging me* |
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Post by Sage on Sept 2, 2004 12:43:39 GMT -5
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Post by Fox on Sept 2, 2004 22:42:10 GMT -5
Yey it's working! And yey I like it! Just out of curiousity...do you draw in class more than pay attention? Cause that's what I did...lol. Oooo, uh...when you get into compositing and editing..., there's a guy with glasses, I'm pretty sure his name is uh...Scott, tell him he sucks at Mario Kart. LoL.
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Post by GT1047 on Sept 10, 2004 14:22:28 GMT -5
 wow that is a nice pic
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wow that is a nice pic