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Post by Defender_16 on Nov 15, 2004 13:01:22 GMT -5
*falls over*  *Thud* I SO did not see that coming. |
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Post by Sage on Nov 15, 2004 13:22:28 GMT -5
oh come on its not that shocking - we all already thought that it was a girl friend or a lover or something like that so really a Wife is just a couple steps above that isnt it? I just wonder if they really were married - i mean who would hold the the weding? I dont think either race would allow that...
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Icarus
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Post by Icarus on Nov 15, 2004 13:46:38 GMT -5
Holy wow. This sure wasn't what I was suspecting... Wow.
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Post by Lardmaster on Nov 15, 2004 17:55:37 GMT -5
So, how long has it been since his exile? I forget if that was explained in the painful flashback or not. Anyway ... Wow. Yeah that dood in the background, got some long pointy ears and some sort of cloak ..... or hes jsut undefined in the body. Keith w/o helmet and wearing cloak? Completely unknown character? Jeez I want something to happen now. This is why I kind of like letting comics lapse for a while to let the story develop at a more continous rate. But I just like twokinds so much ... I check it out all the time. Anticipation kill me. Blarg.
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Terotrous
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Post by Terotrous on Nov 15, 2004 19:56:13 GMT -5
I thought it was keith watching flora at first but if it is, he's taken his helmet off.
Also, Keith is notably younger during his exile (and they said it was because he killed his parents, not because of his marriage. It couldn't have been that recent.
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Post by Lardmaster on Nov 15, 2004 21:17:28 GMT -5
Heh. I lovses teh little heart comin offa em when they kiss....
I checked out some of the older comics, who boy have things change. I seem to ignore it as I usually follow the linear progression, but with big jumps ..... jeeze. Their necks are so skinny! Lol. I kinda miss the blue on Trace's face, and Flora's old ears, but overall the chars are much better presented now.
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Post by Sage on Nov 16, 2004 0:38:50 GMT -5
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Post by Lardmaster on Nov 16, 2004 0:52:26 GMT -5
Ha, ask us like its our choice. But I guess if you transfer yours TO us, them let it be used. I beleive this to be an excellent example of coloring fun. I especially love the Flora's clothes. Of course only half of that is the fact that green is my favorite color ;3
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Terotrous
Keidran Merchant
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Post by Terotrous on Nov 16, 2004 2:45:21 GMT -5
I think that looks great, Sage.
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SupSuper
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Everything you do, I do it worst
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Post by SupSuper on Nov 16, 2004 8:37:21 GMT -5
nice work Sage  |
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Post by Sage on Nov 16, 2004 8:58:51 GMT -5
thanks now all i need is aproval from the person that doesnt like me coloring them ^^;
Anyways heres the first thought i had on the comic -- about the mysterious person -- It could be Keith's Wife - it would be the perfect moment! She shows up and thinks Flora is Keith's "new girl" so Flora gets confronted by a bitter wife... ^^;
You know Keith probably broke up with her when she went into heat and grabbed the nearest guy person thing >_<
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what4boutm3
Keidran slave
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Post by what4boutm3 on Nov 16, 2004 11:45:46 GMT -5
Not bad, but the letter seems kinda weird. And the last pannel looks off too.
Nice coloring though.
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Terotrous
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Post by Terotrous on Nov 16, 2004 15:16:22 GMT -5
Anyways heres the first thought i had on the comic -- about the mysterious person -- It could be Keith's Wife - it would be the perfect moment! She shows up and thinks Flora is Keith's "new girl" so Flora gets confronted by a bitter wife... ^^; You know Keith probably broke up with her when she went into heat and grabbed the nearest guy person thing >_< That'd be pretty nuts, but I can't help but think from the way Keith's been acting that she broke up with him, not the other way around. He seems really bitter about it, so it's clear that he was hurt. |
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Post by Sage on Nov 16, 2004 15:24:35 GMT -5
Not bad, but the letter seems kinda weird. Nice coloring The letter doesnt have a lot of detail but really all i can do is add some more shading because of how it is wrapped around the tree and otherwise its pretty accurate for the lighting And whats wrong with the last panel? I cant fix it if you dont tell me what the problem is (also use the edit button dont double post) That'd be pretty nuts, but I can't help but think from the way Keith's been acting that she broke up with him, not the other way around. He seems really bitter about it, so it's clear that he was hurt. Well the way I see it even if Keith broke up with her he still loved her so it would be the same emotional stress - he's trying to protect himself by thinking all Keidrans are animals and nothing more - he doesnt want to beleive that his wife would willingly betray him -- thats how i see it... |
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Icarus
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Post by Icarus on Nov 16, 2004 17:01:17 GMT -5
Waht's wrong with the last panel? that's my favorite of all! I love the lighting and the sky in the back ground. BTW, GREAT job Sage. That's super cool! Kool! Kewl! Quel?
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