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Post by Rai the Cheetah on Sept 27, 2004 17:17:00 GMT -5
Hi hi >^^< Just to confuzzle everyone. I posting this here and will be reposting soon. Purge - H is accually an experimental Webcomic I myself am building. I am working on the first page to turn into Kisai for keenspace. I'll get it posted here soon as I can. As seigefox and few others know, I touch paintshop and my computer explodes in a fury of satanic flames. Lol I cannot use paint programs or color worth anything. So all my comics are done in Pencil with boarder's inked in pen for easier panel seperation. I'll post some character designs as well for critique before I try to turn them into Kisai. Note: I am currently working on it so it might not be up till tommorrow. Then again i am sitting here for 5 hours at my computer desk doing nothing (my job is so boring) so maybe doen in a few hours. Weeee!
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Post by Rai the Cheetah on Sept 27, 2004 17:20:31 GMT -5
opps.. here.. lol I forgot I had one character already drawn out. www.angelfire.com/tx6/darkfurredpuma/DRAW/Diago.jpgThis was a sketch I did about 2 years ago. yeah I have planned this comic that far ago haha. So somethings are changed, but thats jsut to give you some basis on my drawing style! And for those of you who decide to explore the rest of the webpage that belogns to, I'll eat you. hehe it was my first webpage i buit and it it is a collage of misc stuff from 2-3 years ago. It never got shut down so I left it there free floating on the web till they do lol. |
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Post by Fox on Sept 27, 2004 19:27:29 GMT -5
Link...doesn't work...for meeh.
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Post by Rai the Cheetah on Sept 27, 2004 19:30:38 GMT -5
Copy paste it to your browser, or just go to www.angelfire.com/tx6/darkfurredpuma and click on the drawings link and find Diago. btw hafl way done ^^ just got to get a scanner open and work on it a bit! Arg - MOdified on when ever time I foudn this out- DAMN YOU UAA! Their HP scanners suck so bad lol I was gonna post my first try at my comic here bu tnooo, there scanners suck. I promise to try to bring you my craptatic drawings around 9pm Alaskan ( +4 est +3 cen +2 mtn +1 psf ) so about 1am ESt at the worst. Damn you school!!! |
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Post by Rai the Cheetah on Sept 27, 2004 23:13:11 GMT -5
 yeah, there it is! |
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Post by Fox on Sept 28, 2004 18:48:13 GMT -5
I think my browser hates me.
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Post by Rai the Cheetah on Sept 28, 2004 18:49:43 GMT -5
Could be that photobucket hates me too? Every computer I log onto though shows it, so i dun know fox. haven't had many replies yet so can't trouble shoot it yet?
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Post by Blind on Sept 28, 2004 22:40:50 GMT -5
First off, not everyone speaks bloody japanese, what the hell is a Kisai? (I presume it's a comic)
The hair really really bothers me, he looks like he has a bald spot on his head. (Frame one and four)
Your lines are way too sketchy, people tend to disvalue the comic due to that, unless it's meant that way...
Your frames need to be more dynamic, all we see is a frontal view of the face and a frontal close up of the eye. Diversify! If your not too sure how, check out other comics to see how they set up panels.
The burning city needs more detail, so does the face, it kinda looks rushed.
Backgrounds are an important part of a comic, it shows the viewer where the character is, a white background gives out an empty feel.
The more time you spend on your comic, the more it will benefit from it.
So good luck, Rai !
Remember I'm only trying to help, I'm not putting your comic down. If you need any tutorials on anything just ask.
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Post by Rai the Cheetah on Sept 29, 2004 1:23:56 GMT -5
he he no no Blind >^^< I am looking for critizism as for the reason I posted a quick experimental page. I wlecome any input at all since I am not very good at what I do. And so you Know, Kisai means fire. Kisai is also the name of the admin for Keenspace which hosts Yosh, Twokinds and many other comics.
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Post by seigfox on Sept 29, 2004 5:24:58 GMT -5
Bad fonts make seigfox cry.  I had some really good comic fonts somewhere that would fit alot better. Remember, typography is your friend. Heheh, civilization is burning, but literally. I find that funny. |
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Post by Raven on Sept 29, 2004 10:50:39 GMT -5
I agree white blind this neads more details.
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Post by Fox on Sept 29, 2004 19:40:49 GMT -5
It works! And yes! Too much white! lol. And yes he does seem to have a bald spot...especially in the first shot. Oh...and I thought it was Kasai, not Kisai that mean Fire? o.O I could be wrong, I haven't taken Japanese...though I wish to  |
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Post by Rai the Cheetah on Sept 29, 2004 23:10:27 GMT -5
Bwaahahah, yes fox you are right accually. I wetn back to check my referance and it is Kasai. But yes I did mean kasai as well not Kisai. Anyway I am working on my sketches again and will repost it here again. So you knwo that was -experimental- kinda of an outline of what i intend to do. www.angelfire.com/tx6/darkfuffedpuma in teh drawigns section is accually how I fully draw. Those each took me over 4 hours. The sketch I posted here took me about 30 minutes lol. Big difference, but I wanted feedback on how to go about when I draw it out fully. The format is the same, but I do intensify the quality of my art, by a lil ; ; I aint that good. And seig >< I coudl use those fonts, Since 1 I cant draw out letters wells, and 2 I hate basic fonts. |
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Post by Lardmaster on Sept 30, 2004 1:54:32 GMT -5
Your websight says 404, packed its bag and moved to Denver. Your sight up? Id like to see waht your more involved sketches look like. I enjoy this because if I ever try and draw something, its far more difficult to discern wether its bald or not than wether it is a person or some sort of bicycle. He he he.
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Post by Raven on Sept 30, 2004 10:39:30 GMT -5
You're web site isen't working.
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