Well...For one you should just take some critiquing with a spot of grace. You'll never advance as an artist if you get insulted by comments and criticism.
Sage knows more about drawing than you do, so I'd consider his advice if I were you. The drawing is ugly, because it's out of proportion and hence any sexual appeal it's meant to gain by that posture turns into ugliness.
Don't take it as an insult that you're work is bad. Take it as a means to improve and listen to other people's criticism as ADVICE.
~FT
Stuck somewhere between procrastination and inspiration, depression from failure and pride of success.
...ENOUGH you guys argue like frigging children, gees, kanashi shut up, sage shut up.
now heres what you two need to learn, first kanashi when someone ACTUALY TRYES TO HELP YOU don't be a prick about it and be THANKFULL, that is if you can get over your englarged ego.
and sage, stop trying to pick art fights when obiously the other person doesn't want help in the first place, now then, helping them is fine and doing an outline for them is great, but you can't help everyone
now my suggeston is to delete this thread, or at least SHUT UP ABOUT THE HORRABLY DRAWN STUFF IN THIS BRANCH, no you know what I'm just gona come out and say it, the picture is crap. Now stop argueing